Alone Again (Challenge from Isis)

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Alone Again (Challenge from Isis)

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 1999-09-29 11:05 AM

Just looking around me,
At peace with the sight.
The beauty I see,
Has no difficult plight.

At rest is my soul,
What else can I ask
This was the goal,
I was up for the task.

A breeze stirs the leaves,
And rain now does threaten.
I feel no one grieves,
As my lawn gets a wettin.

The emotion once swirled,
At peace I now be.
Content with the world,
And the one who is me.

I threw this together on my coffee break. Once challenged my mind wouldnèt stop working. Thankyou Isis for the challenge.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-09-29 11:49 AM

Very well done for a coffee breaker.
As all your work does, this has a smoothe flow to it. Nicely done.

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Michael Anderson

May Darkness find you all through the day.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 1999-09-29 11:55 AM

Who says breaks are wasted time... besides my boss? *G* Well done!

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 1999-09-29 05:27 PM

Thankyou both for your comments. suthrn tell your boss that while the hands are idle the mind still races...lol.

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

4 posted 1999-09-29 10:16 PM

enjoyed this much Marilyn.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-09-29 10:21 PM

Ah, that we could all be content with the world and all that is me (us?). Very good. I think you need to take more coffee breaks!

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 1999-09-29 10:25 PM

Pepper...Thankyou.

Poet...Make my life a coffee break!! LOL. I am glad you liked it. Means a lot to me. I am in awe of your work.

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