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Open Poetry #2

What We've Become

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-09-26 09:31 PM

What We've Become
We aren't what we used to be now.
We've altered and changed some how.
We began as no more than friends, and we've become no less than lovers.
What we've become is a total mistake.
One I never in my life thought I could make.
But I will always love you.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-26 10:12 PM

Very well done, Lynn. Short and to the point and 'says it all'.

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Denise

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-09-26 10:24 PM

I like this, but is it a bad thing to fall in love with a friend? Not sure as I've never done it!

loverbaby
Junior Member

since 1999-09-07

Posts 15
Sioux City Iowa

3 posted 1999-09-26 11:09 PM

i think that this was very impressive the way that you got your point out so clear and short....i loved can relate well....~*Niki*~

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-09-27 06:54 AM

Great poem......
I fell in love with a friend of mine...
wasn't a bad experience for me, but I'm sure its different for every person.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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