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Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-09-26 08:38 PM

Never Again
His heart spoke to
me in the silence
of the wind.
Telling me that he
no longer wanted
me, that he no longer
loved me.
His eyes gazed
at me from a
distance, craving
me once more.
But, I wouldn't
put myself in
that situation.
Not now.
Not ever.
Not again.
I've fallen for
his eyes too many
times.
I won't allow
myself to get
lost in the passion
once more.
Not now.
Not ever.
Never Again....

[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 09-26-1999).]

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-26 08:41 PM

Lynn, this is absolutely beautiful! Very nicely done!

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Denise

Richard 33
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

2 posted 1999-09-26 08:51 PM

Lynn, I too, once had that special someone
all I had to do is look at her, she was my
first wife. At one point in time, I loved her more than life itself. We divorced, and
boath had failed second marriages, one day she came back around, I was vulnerable, so
weak, she said she wanted to work it out
with me so that we could be together again.
she ended up running away with another man,
and my heart was broken once more.I agree
with you completely, wonderful poem!!!!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-09-26 09:05 PM

Lynn...a beautiful expression of your pain, the format works very well with this piece and it flows nicely

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-09-26 09:46 PM

Wow Lynn, wow....beautiful, powerful work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

5 posted 1999-09-26 09:56 PM

feels better now doesn't it??? to get it out.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

6 posted 1999-09-26 10:48 PM

From a place of pain to a place of strength is a great journey....glad you made it successfully...good poem!

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 1999-09-26 10:56 PM

Lynn, this is beautiful, well done

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 1999-09-27 07:39 AM

Lynn,
You did a good job all around.

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