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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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Yearning, I desire, my Phantom afar. Nightly I seek, for the words of my star. Obstinate, yes. I ask of her no less. Her mind understanding, times I digress. Always in my heart, she stays on my mind. My only true hope, is payback in kind. A voice my soul knows and never forgets. Long are the days, hours passing in fits. Missing her nightly, it tortures my soul. Alone without her, the world seems so dull. Knowing that someday, she'll come make me whole. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
No matter how this is read, it's a wonderful poem and a tribute to someone very special.. She has to be to have your love.  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My friend, you are one lovesick puppy.  ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
DE isn't that like the pot calling the kettle black? Look at yourself!!!!! |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Christopher...?? what is this??... lol j/k my friend Simply lovely! He's been bitten bitten bitten, by the 'lil love bug! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Christopher....I can definately relate...and don't let that Dream guy hastle you, he's been love sick longer than you ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Christopher, It won't be the last time I'm pretty sure. I would say from the sound of the poem you are fairly young. Enjoyed the read. |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
LOL! Thank you all! DE- Thwpppt! Neener-neener! Sey- Maybe just young at heart. This poem sounds a certain way, because I wanted to do a "certain" something with it! Thank you though... I think! [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 09-24-1999).] |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
I can really relate to alonging like this Christopher. "A voice my soul knows and never forgets." I have long been searching for that voice......:-) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, Christopher... and LOL @ the neener-neener for DE! *G* |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You guys ought to get bitten more often. lol I like the things you write when your in love. LOL...it's amazing to watch you 3 turn flip side from your normal writing. Very good! |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Thank you girls! And yes dove, it is...well different! I'm working real hard on trying to get back into the "old" swing of things...but can't seem to clear my mind of this beautiful voice in my head... Sigh |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Indeed, Christopher, We stand in a very similiar situation. Hold her close in heart and dream till, indeed, you're holding her. Michael |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I'm with WhtDove on this! You guys are all "glowing" like you're pregnant or something !! It's absolutely wonderful seeing you guys all sappy ! I love it, as I cherish you all....*** curtsies Michael has made me "glow" too, although I'm absolutely Positive I am NOT pregnant !!! LOL Hard to get that way 2000 miles away....read his newest to me....it's outstanding... ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
payback in kind - of course. I have a greater (I win...!) hope of course, one to do with sight and touch. This is exquisite, this is precious, this is understood and held dear. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
The feeling was wonderful in this. I congratulate you on finding someone that can make you feel this way. I am envious. lol. |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Thank you Michael and PFF, when I write of how I feel, I do so knowing that I may very well be echoing the feelings of others here, including you two, DE and one~voice, as well as many others! K- I am so very glad you understood it, as I am sure none other would! Marilyn-and envious you should be, but you can't have her, she's mine! LOL |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Very well written Christopher ... Great one ! |
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