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since 1999-09-26
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Whitesboro,NY,USA
0 posted 1999-09-26 07:15 PM


you mock my innocence
but break my fall
watch and laugh
as I conceal it all
your eyes tell me
you know what I hide
and how I believed your face when you lied
you never quite release me
to end my silent strain
confusion drowns me like a sea
you feed upon my pain
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since 1999-07-05
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1 posted 1999-09-26 08:46 PM

Very nicely done....welcome to passions
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-09-26 10:35 PM

Nicely done indeed! Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Member Seraphic
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3 posted 1999-09-26 11:10 PM

Ditto!

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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-09-27 07:41 AM

Mark,
well done and welcome.
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