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Scribe Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 14Capetown, South Africa |
delicate passion expression of self frozen in time in the book on the shelf lifting it down with reverence and trust with gentle breath blow off the dust there find the truths and half truths of ages in the poet's words on the poet's pages ------------------ "just another lost child, trying to find my way" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent....I loved this, very well written and one all of us as poets can relate to. ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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graham Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 60South Yorkshire, England |
I liked this a lot. My only dismay was its brevity. I'd like to have read more Scribe. |
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Scribe Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 14Capetown, South Africa |
graham you're right .... i'm too impetuous for completion ... i write what i think of and then end it there which is a bit useless |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Scribe: Sometimes our thoughts are never concluded..  HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Scribe! ------------------ Denise |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Excellent...very well said! ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
As a collector of old books I love this one. Many a day I rearrange my books...dust them.. touch them..open them lovingly...I have an old, old book of poems with wonderful old drawings in it.  |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully done and well said. The ultimate immortallity. To be reverently touched throughout the ages. Excellent. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Scribe, Good poem, good thought, well done. |
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