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As I look back... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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There are still things I have not told you These things I have not said They are simple yet I want to say You have treated me wonderfully With so very much respect You slowly get to know the inner side of me You do not knock down my defenses or come crashing through the door You care about my feelings And everything I say You have been such a joy to be around in each and every way I did not think it possible That you would touch my heart so soon There are a few more things I do not believe I've mentioned I was scared to show you this love I have inside I was caught off guard, quite surprised By the way you glided into my life But when I first talked with you and every other times we shared Are the little things I so treasure It is the little things I love I was scared to tell you about me But, something inside let me Let you deep inside of me Justbleu ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-27-1999).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Bleu, this was wonderful! How many times we are afraid to show what we feel and let someone in. I'm glad you found the strength. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So very true Whtdove!! Thank You!!  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well done, bleu! Loved this - sounds like you could put it to music. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Cool!! I wonder what it would sound like!! Justbleu ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
This is so moving! And it would sound great as music ------------------ What you hid from your parents as kids, you will hide from your kids as parents. ~Cletus T Judd~ |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Well done!! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You both!! Does anyone compose music around here?? LOL!! Justbleu ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What an excellent tribute to someone who's obviously very special to you... well done! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I know how wonderful it feels to be completely captivated like this. You are very lucky to be experiencing this. Beautiful poem. ------------------ Michael Anderson May Darkness find you all through the day. |
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