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understandable offense
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understandable offense |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
understandable offense turn your head so very quick the air suddenly so thick and your disgust does shine through oh you glare your skin so rosy turn your nose up on me i can read your thoughts yes i can how dare this man stare at me such common trash then the seconds over you go upon your way your hate though seems to linger seems to sway.. and stay with me always ------------------ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done. You pack so much emotion into each piece that you do. I particularly like the ending! ------------------ Denise |
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