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Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-09-25 12:47 PM


Soft blush of sunset
paints footprints across the sea -
do you dream in pink?

Morningtide retreats
waves returning thought for thought
my sun-bold reply

You sing my ocean
reaching out from that far shore -
I will share your spring.


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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

[This message has been edited by Beki (edited 09-25-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 1999-09-25 10:22 AM


You are definitely the Haiku queen - I particularyl like the "Soft blush of sunset" - Very nice work, Bek...
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-25 10:43 AM


Wonderful!!! this I could feel!!

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-09-25 10:47 AM


gorgeous

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-09-25 01:44 PM


Simple & so sweet. I agree with Nan...Queen Beki!!!
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
5 posted 1999-09-25 01:48 PM


Another exquisite work, Beki
The sun is, indeed, shining bold
on you this morning.

Michael

Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
6 posted 1999-09-25 08:15 PM


soft blush of poet
reaching out with pen and ink
giving thanks to all

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 1999-09-25 08:19 PM


Another beauty my friend.

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
8 posted 1999-09-26 06:19 AM


And more thanks to you, my friend :-)
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