I Agree With Nochtdraco~~ Paradelle's Bite...hehe

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Open Poetry #2

I Agree With Nochtdraco~~ Paradelle's Bite...hehe

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-09-25 12:25 PM

Hollow wind throughout the halls
Hollow wind throughout the halls
Echoes in my mind and soul
Echoes in my mind and soul
In my hollow mind and soul
wind echoes throughout the halls.

In the embittered silence of loneliness
In the embittered silence of loneliness
The fear of abandonment hovers
The fear of abandonment hovers
Loneliness hovers in fear of silence
the abandonment of the embittered.

Extreme emotion dies with age
Extreme emotion dies with age
Innocence stolen with truth
Innocence stolen with truth
Age stolen with extreme truth
innocence dies with emotion.

Innocence dies in embittered silence
stolen with fear of truth.
With age hovers extreme loneliness
the abandonment of emotion.
The hollow echoes of wind throughout
the halls in my mind and soul.

AAAAAHHHHH I did a crappy job! And I am never doing this again...DreamEvil made me do it!! hahahah I could fix it.. but I don't have enough energy!

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 1999-09-25 02:06 AM

I DISAGREE Lucie, I loved this.
Especially innocence stolen with truth!

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-09-25 02:07 AM

You did well, Lucie. I knew you would.

Paradelles are fun!
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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-25-1999).]

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2011-02-20 06:05 PM

Another good one.

A

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