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With Apologies ... (a paradelle)
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With Apologies ... (a paradelle) |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap 
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Creating song in verse Creating song in verse This poet's happiness This poet's happiness This happiness in verse Creating poet's song; Of words composed in play Of words composed in play An artful parody An artful parody In parody composed An artful play of words. Pride wrought of artist's skill Pride wrought of artist's skill Regrets an empty well Regrets an empty well An empty pride well wrought Regrets of artist's skill; Composed in poet's words, An artful song of play; Creating happiness. An artist's pride regrets This parody of skill Well wrought in empty verse! ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Pardon me for sounding grouchy, but I hope this darn thing gives everyone else as much heartburn as it gave me! I've never written anything so awkward in my entire life!  But I DID enjoy the challenge ... and hope never to relive it! Nocht |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I have to agree - These aren't nearly as much fun as other formats - and I think that "awkward" is a good modifier..... but - the good news is - You succeeded...  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sounds like a faradiddle paradiddle!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You did very well by it...maybe I should tackle one some time ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think this beats our efforts in the Poetry Workshop. Yep, I do. A |
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