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Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

0 posted 1999-09-24 10:25 PM


If I could I would take the worlds weight off
your shoulders.

If I could I would cry all the tears so that
you are never sad again.

If I could I would take the burden of your
pain.

If I could I would take all of the shame so
that you would punish yourself never more.

I can tell you that I do understand.

I can tell you that you are loved by many.

I can tell you that I will be there for you.

I can ask you to please hold on.

I can say that I would be hurt if you were
gone.

I can tell you that you have brothers, and
sisters here "that have been there" that
love you, and that care!!!

To lose you, and your endless beauty that
dwells inside would be a shame.

I pray that you hang on.

I say this prayer in God's name!!!!

© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-09-25 01:12 AM


Aswe all do...

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-25 10:28 AM


Beautiful and touching Richard...she will appreciate I'm sure

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

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