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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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The essence of our spoken word's mere thought Of actions, when surmised are just intent. Interpretation from our doings lent; Words ineffectual are vowed for naught. Intrinsic trust's from inference ne'er wrought ~ Each overt deed derives impressions spent; Deficiencies mar aspirations meant ~ Verbiage percieved is often nary sought. Absent resolve's inadequate prepense; Avowed intent once covenant's achieved, Reality's defined by compeer's heed. All credibility for promise hence Ambitions met - then credence is conceived; Enacted words are truly Words InDeed.  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-26-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You blew my mind, Nan, as you always do!!: ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I vote we create new words to describe the excellence of your verse as most adjectives are trite and fall short of describing such elegance. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Dammed clever, I wish at times I had your flair for words. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Now here's a lady who owns a dictionary!  Nan, your eloquence is always a fresh breeze to me! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
wonderfully done ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Your awesome. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW!!!! ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Your meter dances like a lilting song, Your diction toes the realm of the divine; Such verses in anthologies belong ... (in other words, this piece was mighty fine!) But, no less than I have come to expect from you. It's refreshing to read the writing of someone who so obviously cherishes the English language ... Keep 'em coming, ma'am ... Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hey Nan, it's daytime in Australia when it is nightime in American!! We have Unicorns here too!!!  ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I am in awe of your talent. Michael |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
InDeed, Nan, inDeed! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
The power of words seems to be uppermost in most people's minds today... Well written Nan.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Werd"...... as my students say - Thanks all.. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Positively marvelous! I read the words, crafted by a goddess of language, and relished in the joy such pearls of beauty caused me. Languishing in a state of dullness and blight, I gloried at the infusion of creativity this woman has wrought. Your words are an elixir m'lady, soothing the sorrowful soul and healing the encumbered mind. ------------------ Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your poetry is BeautyInDeed |
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Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
You're a trip, miss Nan. How do you know all those big words? LOL. Get me a dictionary and sneak it in here to the 'stute, ok? You don't know me, but..... maybe one day you will.  hehehe Justin T. |
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Justin Kace Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 82Oz |
...Nan needs protection - I'm with ya, Justin Thyme.. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I agree with all the above on this Nan! Especially Dream, we need to find new words to comment on your poetry. Hmmn, let me go dig out my dictionary. lol Very well done indeed! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'll just be repetitious and say - well done! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is why I don't like to post from home... I'm blind to my postings... [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 09-27-1999).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But I swear by all that's holy and on my mouse's honor, I only hit reply ONCE! *G* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 09-27-1999).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I guess you know by now that I liked it? LOL [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 09-27-1999).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Scuttling back to my corner... with apologies for my burping! *G* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 09-27-1999).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Methinks there's an echo in here... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm with suthern  |
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