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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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death, rain falls d -r --i -p ---p --i ----n -g on my heart Fragile, pale, hopeless. Still, lifeless, empty. bitter songs... empty air... timeless ache... No hope. With the darkness, comes confirmation. With the light, comes pain. with the onslaught, of awareness, comes... not you... I am alone. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
First I must say you're not alone in any way other than physically. Second - I really like the way you shaded your words...It intrigues me how colors identify with our emotion so well. Michael |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
You are not alone at all my friend. I find myself drawn to your use of color as well. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I love the dramatic poem with the dramatic format and colors! Presentation is wonderful!  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Christopher this is a little work of art, here  Enjoyed the read and the visual on this.------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Lovely piece Christopher both visually and aurally...how do you do that? I need someone to teach me things like color and changing fonts.......love this |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Christopher: I know what I feel when I read this and the only thought that goes through my head is 'share a hug with me?' Hope is opening your eyes, thinking that next thought, taking that next step..little things, but all mean you have hope.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well presented Christopher ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Thank you all, the hugs and camaderie are dearly appreciated. As Balladeer said earlier and I'm sure many others have before...this is my family, a home away from home. Dysfunctional, arguementative, but also supportive and caring. All of you mean the world to me, and will live forever in my heart! Chris |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, Chris! This is truly a work of art! ------------------ Denise |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I second that, the colors but the format was just as important to the feeling being conveyed...very alluring. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Amazing. The coloUrs are so great! Tch tch, bit too depressing - I'll have to 'slap' you out of it! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful. I feel it in my soul. I know excatly the aloneness of which you speak. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome piece! |
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