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The Keeper Of Keys
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 39


0 posted 1999-09-03 07:33 PM


Walking through a lonely field,
Dark skies, dark clouds,
So ferociously and utterly blanked,
Your astounding glance parts the clouds so quickly,
The stars shine through the dark clouds,
Illuminating the dark skies.

A beautiful world for such a beautiful girl,
I promise you this and so much more,
Forget the foolish standards you've set for yourself,
I'll never leave your side,
Hand in hand,
Stride for stride.

Thoughts of embracing you quiver me,
Unparalleled warmth glistens in your eyes,
Such fine eyes,
So entrancing they are,
Rest well for I'll not go back on my word,
I desire your fair lips touch,
This I desire,
Oh so much.


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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~


© Copyright 1999 The Keeper Of Keys - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 1999-09-03 07:38 PM


ooh, I like!!!

I enjoyed that!! Thanks

I'm a new member too!!

Justbleu

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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2 posted 1999-09-03 07:41 PM


Keeper: nice work. Could be me you write of...I have those foolish standards and that glance. I liked it.

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*shadowy-one*

The Keeper Of Keys
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 39

3 posted 1999-09-03 07:42 PM


Thanks Justbleu. Thanks to you as well passing shadows, feedback really helps my writings. I appreciate it all!!!

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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 1999-09-03 07:44 PM


Your welcome!!

Justbleu

The Keeper Of Keys
Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39

5 posted 1999-09-03 07:45 PM


P.S., if you liked these, check out my other ones in the teen forum. Ive posted about 5 of my recent writings there, check em' out.

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~


passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-04-23 03:33 AM


ah...remembering those days
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