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What I Long For... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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I long for awesome sunsets Someone to share them with, Romantic walks along the beach A passionate, tender kiss. I long for summer nights To lay beneath the moon, Make love under twinklin stars Or in the park at noon. I long for summer dances In a field filled high with wheat, Or the coldness of a stream Where we could hang our feet. Romantic dinners by candlelight A loving word from you, A warm and steamy bath With bubbles filled for two. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My dear, such a departure from your usual work!! I hope to see much more of this from you my friend.  These are truly the things of which romance is made and I for one practice them all as diligently as I can, as often as I can. ------------------ Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-03-99).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hello I'm new around here!!! I quite enjoyed your poem, I often dream of such things myself!!! Thank You for sharing your poem!! Justbleu |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! It's something I long for also - you really hit a nerve here WhtDove! How about an encore - I like this style!  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This was very beautiful, you have wonderful thoughts. ------------------ Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Positively sublime, this! You've read my mind and written my wants ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW! This is great WhtDove! So romantic and lyrical! (I wouldn't mind having a weekend like this!) (or how about a whole year!)------------------ Denise |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a beautiful dream, WhtDove. I do hope you find it... ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Gosh, I am overwhelmed with these responses. Thanks to each and everyone of you! PDV, thank you!! I think all of us women yearn for these things. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WhtDove, what a romantic you are! This is wonderful. These are wonderful thoughts and you deserve every one of them. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Balladeer I am honored! I have to admit I am a die hard romantic, can't help myself. My weakness. But thank you for your compliment. It means a lot to me!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WhtDove, this is so beautiful,so romantic I love it [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-04-99).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you DAngel. Here's to dreamin! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful....I wish you much luck. I dream of the same. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Everyone wants (sometimes longs) for this type of romantic love. You have painted the picture well. I think you may want to consider a different rhyme than "with" and "kiss".... perhaps "I long for awesome sunsets/ With someone I will miss" or, better yet "I long for awesome sunsets/ a rhapsody of bliss". just a suggestion. Otherwise, enjoyed the read.  dp |
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Angel Rand Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 134London UK, and Zurich Switzerland |
You got me dreaming! When done reading your poem I just sort of sat back and sighed and... ah well you know what I mean. Your words sent my memory on a trip to another place in time. TY! Angel |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you doreen for the suggestion! I appreciate that! Angel Rand, thank you! That is what I was aiming for. It put quite the vision in my head as I was writing it. I am glad those words could give you a happy moment in time. That is the ultimate comment dear, thank you! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I cannot beleive that I did not reply to this--I do remember reading it...shame on me a thousand times, but this is just the yearning of one soul to meet all existance... |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
This poem is very beautiful. It touched my heart. Are there men out there that long for the same things we do? I sure hope so. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Serenity I can LOL Oh well! Now ya know hahah...Phoebee I'm not really sure about that. If there are any out there, I guess I just haven't ran into them, nor have I met them. LOL I'm sure there are some out there. Thank You! |
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toes21 Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 24 |
Your poem was a pleasure to read. |
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Adrienne Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 20California |
WhtDove, with this poem you have made me to believe in such things... Hopefeully you, as well as I have the chance to encounter such splendid contentment. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I hope you knew these things, that temporal life brings sweet voice that n'er shall sing now placed beyond death's sting -I who did not know ye |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I won't forget you, Becky. Love & Light, jo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Funny I read this and thought she must surely have all that and more now. She can still make me smile a million miles away. Lovely just lovely look on love. |
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