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Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-09-22 07:17 PM



Never Were.....

You begin to fade away
in the fog that roles
around the waters of
desire.
You begin to disappear
as you walk farther
and farther down memory
lane.
You are no longer there
as soon as I finally
realize that you never
were.

[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 09-22-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
1 posted 1999-09-22 07:23 PM


very poignant Lynn....well written....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-22 08:52 PM


Very well stated....I know how it feels to be in that situtation

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
3 posted 1999-09-22 10:55 PM


genuine and succinct...nicely done.

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

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