Open Poetry #2 |
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Windows To Your Soul |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston ![]() |
I looked into the windows of your soul today. I saw your fear my love would fade away. No matter the times I talk and try to reassure that my love for you sweetheart is deep and pure. You continue to hold this fear you have so close to you a barrier you hold up against me hurting you. After all this time my love, do you not realize? Or see the love I have for you within my eyes? Forever you hide behind this wall your building. Perhaps it just your way to stop the feeling. But you should know no matter what you do that I could never see myself not loving you. For you are the other half that makes me whole the life long awaited mate to my inner soul. There is no other that could take my love from you so let down your guard and let yourself love me too. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, dear this is lovely! A wonderful love poem! I like this one, hope you gave it to your hubby! ![]() |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Lucie you did well with your verse but even better with your dealing with the current situation. Proud of you I am. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Beautiful entreaty Lucie. :-) ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Lucie, this is fabulous....very touching and beautiful. Hey, my e-mail has been down, I hope you've been missing me !! ARGH ! If it's not Michael, it's mail !! he he he Hoping to get it back before I start my move...will miss you desperately if I don't !! Hope you're hanging in there??? ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely done Lucie!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Lucie, I loved this one! Very touching! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
I agree, very touching ![]() |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A lovely sentiment, Lucie. Love has a way of breaking down barriers, hang in there... ------------------ Michael Anderson And so, being young and dipt in folly I fell in love with melancholy, But dreams - of those who dream as I, Aspiringly, are damned, and die: EAP |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lucie, You said it well and I enjoyed the read. |
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