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chris Junior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 29rowlett, texas, usa |
tick-tock tick-tock tick-tock the minutes turn into hours hours empty and wasted what have i done? "daddy, can we play?" i'm busy "daddy, can you read to me?" ask your mother "daddy, do you love me?" busy always busy not enough hours NOT ENOUGH TIME!!! "daddy will play tomorrow." "daddy will read tonight." i'll be there in a minute minutes turn into hours those hours have turned into years "gran-pa, do you love us?" busy |
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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
and time flies, unnoticed by our mundane considerations. very well put, that feeling that has been considered for so long.... life is what happens to you while your busy making other plans.... Jhon Lennon Ixtab |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
sigh, yep, happens time and time again...good poem  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Time, ahh but for more. Nicely done...CHRIS! Love your screen name! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Reminds me of a song about the same subject.....time will get away from us if we let it "If I could only stand on a strret corner with my hat in hand, and get people to throw their wasted time into it!" ~Bernard Berenson ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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