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A Wish For Loneheart..
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A Wish For Loneheart.. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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The Knight of Doves is alone right now, Feeling unloved and in pain, Here's hoping the Fragile Rose, Can ease his burden so the Knight can smile again. The Rose, she offers her friendship, Straight from her pure heart, She offers baskets of understanding, That seems a wise place to start. The Rose then offers a shoulder to cry on, A sympathetic ear, She hopes her laughter and friendship, Can squash her Knight's deepest fears. Fragile of heart herself hoping her caring ways, Can strengthen theis knight's soul, Can show him he is not alone these days, The feelings of despair haven't taken their toll. For already she has learned to see , The Knight's soul shining within, Full of wisdom and beauty, A friendship so freely given. The Rose just wants to remind the Knight, That she is there for him, No longer alone will he have to fight, She hopes his recovery will soon begin. Sir Loneheart, this Fragile Rose hopes that you know, You now have a new loving friend, To talk to when feeling low, Her loving and understanding she does send! [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 09-19-99).] You can edit more than once - no problem... [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-19-99).] See??? [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-19-99).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hey you can't edit things twice!!! So the last line should read 'Her loving and understanding she does send!'... ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Isis.....I hope he appreciates this one...you are very kind. ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
I too, second your poem isis, we are al there for him. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hope you get to read this soon my friend.. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I thought you were going to read it right away Lone heart>>? Naughty man, hope you HAVE read it and just didn't leave a comment!! ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Isis, this was great. Emotional and caring piece. Very good! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks WhtDove, I just don't think Loneheart has read it yet!! ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
The moon fills my eyes with sorrow Fair maid life blossoms all around this knight Yet my world is darkened where is mine light that I shall find my way Thy presence enlightens my soul fragile rose true friendship is a thing to be cherished And cherish it I shall thy poem given freely unto this knight shall I hold close unto mine heart Thy friendship fills mine heart with light the flowers with all their majesty burst around me Truly it is easier to find ones way when two or more candles burn bright I honor thee fair rose not only for thy caring heart but for such a beautiful poem as well Thy Servant Loneheart ------------------ Loneheart |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Glad you finally read my little poem my friend. Thy Fragile Rose.. ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
I would have read it much sooner Isis but my job takes me away many days at a time But as I stated earlier it is truly lovely again thank you for thy friendship |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Check your email Houston, we have a problem.. ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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