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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
you touch me.. you do with your heart your mind whats lost behind a ray so bright you lived my light was i such a burden a weight so deep i define sleep now i hold on to your grace we now live i carry you to some place out of focus a blurry sight we make love right ------------------ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I liked it!! Justbleu  ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful..."a blurry sight we make love right" ah, to be carried out of focus....nicely worded ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
i agree with the last reply, "we make love right", great phrase, thats just beautiful. ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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