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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-22 01:46 PM


you touch me..
you do
with your heart
your mind
whats lost behind
a ray so bright
you lived my light
was i such a burden
a weight so deep
i define sleep
now i hold on to your grace
we now live
i carry you
to some place out of focus
a blurry sight
we make love right




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© Copyright 1999 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 1999-09-22 01:52 PM


I liked it!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-22 07:02 PM


Wonderful..."a blurry sight
we make love right"
ah, to be carried out of focus....nicely worded

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

The Keeper Of Keys
Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39

3 posted 1999-09-22 07:09 PM


i agree with the last reply, "we make love right", great phrase, thats just beautiful.

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.


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