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Wanting Someone (Please tell me what you think)
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Wanting Someone (Please tell me what you think) |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
The world spins round everyday Each day passes farther and farther away The last warming of my heart fades as well And I'm left alone in love's dry spell Just when I feel that it's been too long And nobody cares to be a part of my song I saw you dancing alone and quiet and still I admired and watched and for you my heart began to will Now I'm lost in your sweet essence I hope you urn to be in my prescense It's clear to me that you are in pain You must feel like you yourself are completely in vain Hurt no more for you deserve great bliss Kiss me my princess, for I am your prince. ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Keeper, this is a keeper. It's beautiful! Going from such disparaging sadness to a tremendous hope. It's great! ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
Oh c'mon guys, no replies?  ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
Thanks WildChild for your reply, it really means a lot. Isnt hope such a beautiful thing?  ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
well, this certainly deserves replies!! Beautiful, beautiful work!! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I can truly feel this ! That's about the way it goes - just about the time you think there is no hope...someone wonderful comes skipping by! And oh what a feeling to find a new love !! Truly can relate, and you captured the moment well.... ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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searchingon New Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 2 |
The yearning was there, pushing through to the surface. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Keeper.....this is beautiful, I for one can certainly relate to it. Thanks for sharing!!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Good poem, happy for you...and way envious because I am "wanting someone" too :-) |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
Thanks everyone, i must say this is the most replies ive ever gotten. You are all so great. desire: such a tremendous thing...------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
What beautiful thoughts you have!!! Sweet and sad all at the same time!! Loved it!! ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
What a treasure Keeper! Something I think we can all relate to! Great job. |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
Thank you again everyone, honestly. Life and love, such precious things... I'm enjoying all of your posts people, keep it up... ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yo Keep....I too like this one....You're not a frog are ya?.....Just kidding....but sometimes ya gotta hop farther, ribbet louder, and shed a few warts before ya do indeed attract that princess to get a kiss. And all of us sometime in our life is at least a Prince or a Princess for a day! |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
I love it! Keeper you've done an excellent job with this one.I believe we have all been there at some point in our lives.Not being able to tell the one you want how you feel is very hard.Anyways...Good job! DBeth ------------------ When we give of ourselves whole heartedly,it comes back around ten fold. |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
I agree with the rest..You have done justice to this feeling lot of us here share.. |
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The Keeper Of Keys Junior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 39 |
I'm going for it guys, im giving it to her and im telling her how i feel. she deserves more than what shes got right now, i gotta make her smile. here goes nothing  ------------------ ~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~ To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting. |
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