Open Poetry #2 |
Never Said |
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Never Said I never said I was lost But you found me I never said I needed you But you came I never said I was lonely But you kept me company I never said I was sad But you dried my tears I never said I was frightened But you protected me I never said I wanted anyone But you understood my longing I never said I cared But you gave me your all I never said “I Love You” But I do PoetDeVine...thanks for this great graphic!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 09-24-1999).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hoot.....that was very nice.... |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, like that one too, very nice when it all comes together without asking |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I really liked this Hoot!!! Simple, but says so much! Very nice! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, I never said I liked it but I do now. |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Oh hoot, that was simply, simply beautiful... Thanks for the read.. |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
very sweet and pure and each word counts... kudos, PAL ------------------ |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Hoot, I loved this! Great job. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- ..."to thine own self be true." >William Shakespeare |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
owl you once again made a great poem like i said before think of getting all of these published ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Lady Hoot: Somethings just don't need to be said to be known. And the heart always hears what is not said. A wonderful piece. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you each and every one of you for your kind comments Andrew, you are very right...somethings go without being said...but sometimes it is also nice to hear those words Jim...once more thanks for your kind words. I actually sent a manuscript out to a publisher for a book of poetry on Monday...wish me luck!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
lovely Hoot...and I wish you good luck! ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Jim Raynor Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 63Churubusco Indiana USA |
Good luck owl i know it will be published its a great poem ------------------ $*%Jim Raynor%*$ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Pepper....thank you and thanks for the well wishes Jim...I think I got myself a fan here, thanks for the vote of confidance ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well stated! I HONESTLY believe, that true love finds you, you don't find it. A lesson here, stop looking, so that you may find. (clap-clap) Cool! (and how appropriate at this moment too!) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Christopher...I thank you and couldn't agree with you more!! |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Ruth, Another gem. Very nice poem . As always, I look forward to more. Your creativity is really flowing now, it seems. I hope I can alway inspire you in some way, and vice versa. Take care now. Tyson |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
simple ans succinct...very nice Hoot! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hoot: I agree with Christopher, sometimes you can also tell by what is NOT said...isn't love complicated?.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hoot good luck! If they turn it down, they're nuts! You work is exquisite. If I spelled that right. heheh |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beki, Rainbow and Whtdove....thank you all so much Tyson....I hope to inspire you for a long time and you the same |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hoot, this is so beautiful, loved it. best wishes for you ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
As many have stated before me, this is wonderful. How soon will you know about your manuscript? Sometimes it can take weeks and weeks. We'll wait nervously with you.... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dark Angel...thank you Poet.....Thanks for the vote of confidance...it could take months to hear anything, till then I cross my fingers and hope for the best |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Hoot: I guess I talk too much and my list of "never said"s is entirely too small... but this makes me want to hush and listen. Absolutely beautiful! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Much said here, hoot_owl, But to echo earlier sentiment; Action speaks much, much louder than word. Well done. ------------------ Michael Anderson And so, being young and dipt in folly I fell in love with melancholy, But dreams - of those who dream as I, Aspiringly, are damned, and die: EAP |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ok..Ruth, I have it fixed....we'll try it again on another one...!!!!! PdV |
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