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~*~ Weep Not For me ~*~
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~*~ Weep Not For me ~*~ |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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Weep not for me, my loves, today like a ship at see, I've sailed away beyond the horizon, you see no more perhaps to reach another shore. Weep not for me, today, but go accomplish things you should, but know that I'll be pleased and there nearby just listen closely, hear my sigh. When oft my name, you should but call I'll be there, loves, to break your fall and listen to your tales of woe then whisper that I love you so. My life's been only good with you around and near with love true blue but now it's time to take my place reserved for me in outer-space. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Interesting....the rhthym and rhyme are very good in this piece, I myself loved it up to the last two lines, I think I would have liked to see it end a bit differently. Welcome to the group ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thanks for the welcome. I am glad you liked it, although I am sorry you didn't like that last two lines =u) |
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Sean Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 17Holtville, CA. USA |
WOW...I jsut read I think all the poems that have been posted by you Echo, and I have to say, they are wonderful, but I dont want to reply to all of them, because I dont want people to get sick of you hogging the top lol, but they are simply wonderful. Especially the ones on page 9, 10, 11, and 12 I think it is. Truly one of my favourite poets in here (no offense to any one else)! I think this one should be read so back up to the top it goes! |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Some poetry you must take seriously, not lightly. Take this as an example. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I thought this was wonderful! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Echo If *I* could make your world right I would do so If I could give you what you need I would do so If I could be what you need I'd be that someone but I'm only me You have to reach for me and then I'm there for you but I was too late... I'm so sorry! ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-23-1999).] |
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