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Star light star bright |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Star light star bright I wished upon a scheme Stroked, in Van Goghs lust Detailed, Renoirs gleam Without Picasso's holocaust. From a sky of blue Dotted in Surats wile Weeping painted dew. A place no man can style. Deprived of all harass More then worth its while. Love in a field of grass Beyond harasses guile. But alas, alas The wished upon scheme Did not come to pass. It still remains a dream. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Cleverly written, Seymour!  ------------------ Julie ------------------------- ..."to thine own self be true." >William Shakespeare |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
I like this, the way the last lines tie it to the title, very well done |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Ditto for me too...such beautiful imagery. ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Clever ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
ingenious.....really like this one Sy........ ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To my true friends above. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. |
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