Just Imagine.....(please comment and critique...)

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Open Poetry #2

Just Imagine.....(please comment and critique...)

silver-moon
New Member

since 1999-07-21

Posts 5
albion, MI, 49224

0 posted 1999-09-21 08:11 PM

Just Imagine

Look ahead to a soft morning
Gazing into your soul-mates eyes

A place where excitement is yearning
And there tears of joy in your cries

Birds singing songs of love
As you awake from a placid night

A past night so peaceful it was seductive
As you heard him tell you everything will be all right

It seems you have waited your entire life
For just this solitude of a moment

This is it, you are now His wife
Now your heart can be the place of His dreams enrollment

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Doesn't this reverie just sound grand?
Oh, even just to imagine?

Don't let go, don't let it slip like sand
Take time to be patient…all will fill in

For all we know, that time may soon appear
And then we will wonder: where did it go?

Now, though we may be happy where our lives were steered,
You would lose half the experience if you lead time
Instead of letting time follow….

So…just have faith…
And believe me my sweetie
When I say
Just imagine, dream, and pray….
And then all will fall into place.

- Justin Heap

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-09-23 11:36 AM

This is very beautiful...you've captured the true feelings of love and endearment well....I've felt all these things before...nice job!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

Mary
Junior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 38
Delaware, Ohio, USA

2 posted 1999-09-23 11:43 AM

Very moving, I can relate. Keep up the good work!!

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