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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-09-21 03:05 AM


This is a poem in response to Systematic Decay's 'describe yourself' challenge. I accidently hit the post new topic instead of the post reply and didnt realize LoL. Anyways...here goes nothing.


Who am I?
That's a silly question.
I am me!
Who is that?
Well since you ask, that is who I am!
What does that mean?
Well, now that you mention it, I'm not quite sure.
I am me! That is to say.
I am when I am me.
Is that OK?
You see, if you don't agree, I can be whatever you want.
Who would you like?
What would you like?
What is it that you wish me to be?
Just myself?
What do you mean?
Which me is that?
Who am I?
Well, now that I stop to think, I guess I'm not so sure.
I am who you need.
I am what you want.
So, which me will it be? W
ho am I?
I guess I can only say,
I am who you see!

[This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 09-21-1999).]

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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
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1 posted 1999-09-21 06:33 PM


* moved from Poetry Challenge - it's too good to lanquish over there by itself...
Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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NM
2 posted 1999-09-21 06:48 PM


I like it, a lot!...whoever you are! lol
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-09-21 07:54 PM


I'm glad Ron moved this here for us. I guess all I can say is I find it very interesting. Most pledge to be the person you don't see and here you are professing the opposite. I think that's important, to let people see the real you!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
4 posted 1999-09-21 08:30 PM


Thanks Ron for moving it =)
Iloveit...Thank you
Hoot...I don't believe in being anything that I am not, therefore I can not say I am somethign I am not. I am what everyone see's and that is the true me!

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