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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-09-20 07:10 PM


No more I'll take this hurting,
No more I'll nurture the fear,
No more I'll wallow in self pity,
I've put an end to the tears.

This is the life God gave me,
With all it's happiness and trials,
I will now do my best,
To make my time here more worthwhile.

The people who fail to understand,
The ones who pretend to care,
I'm so much more than them,
Their hearts they just ain't there.

I know who and what I am,
Know my strengths and failings,
But on this cruiseship of life,
I won't be left waving at the railings.

I'll be in it all, in the midst of the fun,
Confident in all that I am,
Out of the gloom and into the sun,
No more slaughter for this little lamb.

The shroud is lifting, I see the sun again,
I've burrowed out of the emotional caves,
My soul is free to sing again,
The happiness it comes in waves.

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA
1 posted 1999-09-20 08:25 PM


I think that when you start really caring about yourself, it is when you start really caring about others. Not much for me to say, but this piece is beautiful as a lullaby. My words are two-year-old scribblings compared to yours.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-09-20 08:56 PM


Hawkwing, thankyou hon, but you write far better than I!

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



beowulf_26
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 183

3 posted 1999-09-20 09:58 PM


Truly wise words. Once again, good job.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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4 posted 1999-09-20 11:22 PM


Thanks again beowulf, a little praise goes a long way..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-09-21 10:38 AM


Wonderful....you go girl!!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
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6 posted 1999-09-21 11:31 AM


Great poem, great resolve!
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 1999-09-21 07:03 PM


I can't believe this. I read this yesterday and must have got carried away on something else. I forgot to reply. Pardon me!

This is great! You have a great outlook. Chin up, spirits high!

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 1999-09-21 07:30 PM


Thanks all for the praise, I mightn't be around for a day or two, my little one is pretty sick. I'm already having withdrawl symptoms..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



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