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Anticipatory Retraction

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-09-20 04:38 PM

Bottom of the line
what does it all mean?
World of players
a one manned team.

What's in this big world?
So much to explore.
You have the key
but can't find the dor.

Answers to your questions
if you only knew,
the most challenging inquiry
who are you?

One deep breath
out for the ride,
searching for something
all fear aside.

On top of the world
what's up there for me?
A whole life ahead of you
totally free!

Jay_Jay
Junior Member

since 1999-09-18

Posts 38
San Diego, CA. USA

1 posted 1999-09-20 04:44 PM

I love your poems, Echo. This one was very good...keep posting!!

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

2 posted 1999-09-20 04:53 PM

Thank you Jay...I will keep posting, I am glad you like my poems, and thank you for your comments on them all! I have yet to read one of your poems though! Do you write, or jsut read?

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-09-20 07:01 PM

Nicely said, Echo - Keep 'me coming;..

beowulf_26
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 183

4 posted 1999-09-20 09:48 PM

Please keep writing as I enjoy your work immensely.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

5 posted 1999-09-20 10:07 PM

very inspiring

Paul Allen Lupien
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 114
Ferndale,Mi.USA

6 posted 1999-09-21 01:08 AM

I echo the preceding replies...

PAL

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Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

7 posted 1999-09-21 02:35 AM

Thank you for your comments...And for those who said to keep posting, don't worry I will!

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