Open Poetry #2 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
???? Sometimes it hit me like a hammer Or an arrow thru the heart or mind A point that is driven to new depths. A balloon released into the sky. Could be a beginning or ending, The gem of love or of hates condemn. The toll of a bell, warning of hell. Or lightning lighting between the clouds. It could be something like a bonding Or a thing of implore or explore. It could be the presenting of truth. Or just a new way of promising. It could be something the fair wind brings, Or it could be the high of a sigh. It could be one of so many things. But I really think it's plain old why? It's the why that makes the mind go round, And the why that brings the fruit to ground. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sy once again you amaze me with your incredible talent...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, why not? Seriously, Seymour, another great poem. I was trying to think of a title but I think it would almost be inappropriate - "it is" something very hard to put a name on isn't it. Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done Seymore!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Philosophical pieces to ponder. Well done, Sir! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Magnificent! Great read, thoughts of why and all the things that go on with why. Soooo why is it that you have so much talent? . ------------------ Julie ------------------------- ..."to thine own self be true." >William Shakespeare |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Catchy title, Sy.....and good poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To my wonderful friends of the web. We thank you, my ego thanks you and my heart thanks you. And most of all "I" thank you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, why are you so talented? ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Dsnyder, I'm really not, just persistant. *L* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
But you are talented! As you prove again...and again...through your persistence! |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Yep..kudos once more Seymour.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn and moonmoon, You people are the greatest, thanks again. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
... and 'why' we come back so many years later. A |
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