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When I Think Of You Now
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When I Think Of You Now |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
When I Think Of You Now When I think of you now I remember the curve of your back and your scent on my pillow after you'd gone. Of all the places I've ever been Your body was the most inviting. Every time we traveled back to each other was like coming home. We never needed words, no apologies or promises; Just a single touch, an open heart and open arms to welcome us back. And now there are no words To say the way it really was. When I think of you now I know that love is only the hope of finding my way home to the curve of your back. © Beki (1989) ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beki I find this so beautiful... Had to knock Micheal down for this one...You always touch my heart! ------------------ Helewes |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
speechless..........okay...I got it back together.....this is stunning..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I agree with Pepper  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beki.....this is an excellent piece......the flow is so smooth and carries the reader in it's wake. I absolutely loved this one ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This one is very dear to my heart so I am especially glad you all enjoyed it...thanks again for reading my work! :-) Jenny Lee..am wondering..." had to knock Michael Down for this one" ? Just curious what that means....;-) ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet |
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