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Open Poetry #2

Capture A Day

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-09-03 08:02 AM

Capture A Day "(C)"05/99 Lost Dreamer

Pink-sky lips arched toward sunset
caressed by dusk's crimson hues.
Twinkling eyes alive with laughter
kissed by moonlights happy glow.
Cool crisp faces capture midnight
embraced by gentle blowing breeze.
Glistening hair dancing with dew
passioned by a gracious sunrise.

Brilliant minds awaken amused
as sunlight's rays warm the air.
Caring spirits lift the senses
as the peaceful spring flowers
follow the sun.
Hearts of gold full of love
reaching as far as rainbows.
Listening ears await your words
as the ocean lulls to relaxation.

Capture a day within your life
and wander through it's parameters.

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Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

Areya
Junior Member

since 1999-06-26

Posts 16

1 posted 1999-09-03 08:52 AM

Very mesmerising. well done..

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

2 posted 1999-09-19 10:46 AM

Areya: Thanks for reading, and responding.

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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3 posted 1999-09-19 10:50 AM

I love the imagery here...'tis quite beautiful

Twinkling eyes alive with laughter
kissed by moonlights happy glow.

Great line!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

4 posted 1999-09-19 10:55 AM

yes...mesmerizing.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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5 posted 2004-04-23 12:50 PM

cool write!

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