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Welcome To My Dreamworld
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Welcome To My Dreamworld |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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(This was written in a game of poetry tag with Master...a bit of a different poem, but it's very fitting to it's title....thanks Master  )Welcome To My Dreamworld Can't you hear the motor turning? Can't you see the candle burning? Can't you see it's flame? Can't you hear my poor heart beating? Can't you see it's life we're cheating? With ourselves to blame. Every day the flame gets brighter. This web we've weaved keeps getting tighter. Can't you feel the burn? Can't you hear the morning breathing? Clouds are turning and receding? Shrinking sky with every turn. Are we here, merely dreaming? Or is passions fire steaming? Deep within our heart. Is it the sun that's calmly rising? Slowly creeping, so surprising? Natures work of art. Cast me in this dreamscape longing. Always here, never belonging. Tumbling to the end. Are you here inside my dreams? Is this reality what it seems ? Answer me my friend. ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This deserves the top spot for sure Great collaboration, you two! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
This definitly deserves to be on the top! And I give all the credit to myself! (Just kidding) I've had a great pleasure working with a great writer, thanks Hoot, you are truly the best! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Great job!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Caroline and Christopher....thank you both so much And Master...it was my pleasure...a bit of a different type work for me, but it was fun...and I am the one who had the pleasure of working with a master ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
naahhhh... I have to say I had MORE pleasure working with you. Thanks Hoot! ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
Love it, great work!! |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Hoot and Master, Wow! Really great collaboration. Hope to see much more. Tyson |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
junaita and tyson....thank you both Okay Master...I won't argue with you ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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