Open Poetry #2 |
Meet Me In My Dreams |
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Meet Me In My Dreams Meet me in my dreams tonight Beneath the starry sky Where comets hail and angels tread And lonely hoot owls fly Hold me there inside your arms Inside your thoughts and mind For when I close my eyes tonight It's you I hope to find Let me see you in my dreams Let me caress your skin With gentle kisses all around Bring out passions deep within Let me give my love to you In my dreams tonight Our passions fire burning You will be my light I want to feel you here with me If only in my sleep When morning comes those memories Safe inside I'll keep Oh, meet me in my dreams tonight Where we will be as one And tomorrow I will smiling greet The setting of the sun ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 09-17-99).] |
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kk Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 14 |
simply put... Romantically charming. |
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Stefanie71 Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 13 |
ditto.. very romantic.. heart felt. |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
Oh to be in love!!! very romantic, wonderful dreams! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hootessa - very sweet - but how can anybody hope to catch a hoot owl in her dreams when she never sleeps? I enjoyed this poem very much. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
flows beautifully and yes, romantic is the word that comes to mind with this piece Hoot........ ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
"Where comets hail and angels tread And lonely hoot owls fly" Beautiful.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I'll see you there... beautiful Hoot! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Seeking in dreams what eludes us in our waking hours... Lovely, Hoot! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you so much everyone for your kind comments Master....I'm closing my eyes as we speak ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow....lovely. So very romantic, and beautiful imagery. Exellent work! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ooh Hoot! Very nice, flowed real well! Romantic just adds the cherry on top! Very nice!!!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This poem simply glows, Hoot Owl. Glides on water. Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Alwaye, Whtdove and Michael....thanks so much for your coments ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
hoot...don't know how I could have missed this one...it is beyond beautiful! May I print it? ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
caroline, you are more than welcome to print it and thanks so much ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Hi Hoot, Another great poem that flowed perfectly. The kind of dream we all hope for. Tyson |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Glad you liked it Tyson....someone I respect a lot gave me the idea ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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