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New thoughts form in my head... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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New thoughts form in my head Although still kind of blurred They’re anxious to be read They’re eager to be heard I feed them to the pen Where they dissolve in ink The pen controls my hand Creating what I think The paper drinks my thoughts And slowly grows in price It dresses up in words And shines before your eyes ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I'll gladly heed the call of a fellow poet, Master...*LOL* But with great writing like this, you hardly need any help!  To the top with you now! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Alright!!! I'm on top of the world! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
How was that 2 second reign? See anything from that mountain??? LOL |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Not much keep me up here for a while!!! LOL |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, I hate to push you back up - ya know, But this was worthy of merit. BTW caroline - I'm cutting your pay! Michael |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
HEY!! Let the Bidding Wars Begin! OR...Does Caroline want to be on top??? ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Love ya Caroline, It seems we have another challenger! [This message has been edited by Master (edited 09-18-99).] |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
What are you doing way down here? |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Looking down at you!!! Grin |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Hehe Master, It was fun wasn't it. Doh - I just put you back!!! Michael |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Now that they all calmed down... I have the top all to myself!!! (devilish laugh) |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
NO... well I'll wait caroline, but the top is destined to be mine again! |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Oh hell... I am tired got to go you guys, but I'll be up there with you in the morning, promise you that! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
My gift to you...bumping you up instead of off! LOL |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey...I hate to see him get a swelled head getting knocked back to the top again, but I absolutely had to reply here. This is a great piece of work master. Wonderfully created...oh I love this part!! "The paper drinks my thoughts And slowly grows in price It dresses up in words And shines before your eyes" ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
So you think... tricked you! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
BRAT!!! hehehehe ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Just woke up and I just have to get back into this. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Good AFTERNOON sleepyhead! *LOL* I did want to say how really great this poem is. You are quite the talented one! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
12 o'clock is still morning for me! Thanks and I feel the same way about your poems Caroline! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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