Open Poetry #2 |
Compassion |
RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
When you want to hurt someone take it out on me nothing much surprises now so feel free They say we hurt the ones we love I guess this must be true It seems I have more faith in you respect and kindness follow through The colours dim but will soon be back just at the time the stars disappear and the dawn emerges, why? You ask Simple! Me and my love are always here... for you... ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your dawn WILL come! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 09-17-99).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Bold, noble, and giving. Nice rainbow! (or not-nice, but well done) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern: I wasn't thinking of romantic love, but more life in general...:-) Thanks for the poem though.. HUSG Christopher: Well now, I am bold, noble (but not by birth) and definitely giving..*g*...and as you can tell, not short on modesty..*g*...I'm kidding, thank you.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-17-99).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
,, [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 09-18-99).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern:...This ungrateful wretch says with tongue in cheek, it's not my dawn I'm wanting to come, (careful) I'll settle for pomes, anytime and as for suckey....Rainbow just blew a fuse...ROFL..*g* HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-17-99).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I see you are one of those people who keep on giving too. Sometimes I wish I could change that about myself. Nicely written...I can relate. ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hoot: Thanks, yep, I never seem able to stop giving...but I guess I kind of like me the way I am...so don't go wishing you could change...it's nice to give and great when you can give to such great people too.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
RG, you do have a big heart ... I can't say why but an image went through my mind : a little girl and a fairy wearing a white dress ... [This message has been edited by JTF (edited 09-18-99).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
JTF: ROFLMAO...That was no wand in my hand...though it does contain magic....hmmmmm HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-17-99).] |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Rainbow girl: If you want you can go check my reply' I told everyone that you were innocent!!! he he!!! |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Oh yeah, great poem!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When I responded to this yesterday, it was with love and concern... and complete ignorance of the fact that I was the villain portrayed. I can only offer my humblest and most sincere apologies and a heart completely innocent of intent to inflict pain on anyone, much less a treasured friend. To know you'd think that would be my choice of actions shows me a me I don't even want to know. I beg your forgiveness. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern: I feel it's a difficult situation and would prefer that this dies quietly but I know you won't accept that..so, the love and friendship I feel for you requires me to say that to forgive a friend is unnecessary, it's a part of my love and the friendship that I give to you...so therefore forgiveness is part of me, just as love, care, trust and saying I'm sorry are...you have all of that from me and always will have.. HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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