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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 1999-09-17 04:14 PM


When you want to hurt someone
take it out on me
nothing much surprises now
so feel free

They say we hurt the ones we love
I guess this must be true
It seems I have more faith in you
respect and kindness follow through

The colours dim but will soon be back
just at the time the stars disappear
and the dawn emerges, why? You ask
Simple! Me and my love are always here...
for you...

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 1999-09-17 04:21 PM


Your dawn WILL come!

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Christopher
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2 posted 1999-09-17 04:21 PM


Bold, noble, and giving.
Nice rainbow! (or not-nice, but well done)

RainbowGirl
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3 posted 1999-09-17 04:27 PM


Suthern: I wasn't thinking of romantic love, but more life in general...:-) Thanks for the poem though..

HUSG

Christopher: Well now, I am bold, noble (but not by birth) and definitely giving..*g*...and as you can tell, not short on modesty..*g*...I'm kidding, thank you..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-17-99).]

suthern
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4 posted 1999-09-17 04:32 PM


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RainbowGirl
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5 posted 1999-09-17 04:54 PM


Suthern:...This ungrateful wretch says with tongue in cheek, it's not my dawn I'm wanting to come, (careful) I'll settle for pomes, anytime and as for suckey....Rainbow just blew a fuse...ROFL..*g*

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-17-99).]

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-09-17 04:58 PM


I see you are one of those people who keep on giving too. Sometimes I wish I could change that about myself. Nicely written...I can relate.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

RainbowGirl
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7 posted 1999-09-17 05:08 PM


Hoot: Thanks, yep, I never seem able to stop giving...but I guess I kind of like me the way I am...so don't go wishing you could change...it's nice to give and great when you can give to such great people too..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


JTF
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8 posted 1999-09-17 05:47 PM


RG, you do have a big heart ...

I can't say why but an image went through my mind : a little girl and a fairy wearing a white dress ...

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RainbowGirl
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9 posted 1999-09-17 05:48 PM


JTF: ROFLMAO...That was no wand in my hand...though it does contain magic....hmmmmm

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-17-99).]

Richard 33
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10 posted 1999-09-17 06:11 PM


Rainbow girl:

If you want you can go check my reply'
I told everyone that you were innocent!!!
he he!!!

Richard 33
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11 posted 1999-09-17 06:13 PM


Oh yeah, great poem!!!
suthern
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12 posted 1999-09-18 07:00 AM


When I responded to this yesterday, it was with love and concern... and complete ignorance of the fact that I was the villain portrayed. I can only offer my humblest and most sincere apologies and a heart completely innocent of intent to inflict pain on anyone, much less a treasured friend. To know you'd think that would be my choice of actions shows me a me I don't even want to know. I beg your forgiveness.
RainbowGirl
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13 posted 1999-09-18 04:10 PM


Suthern: I feel it's a difficult situation and would prefer that this dies quietly but I know you won't accept that..so, the love and friendship I feel for you requires me to say that to forgive a friend is unnecessary, it's a part of my love and the friendship that I give to you...so therefore forgiveness is part of me, just as love, care, trust and saying I'm sorry are...you have all of that from me and always will have..

HUSG


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


passing shadows
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14 posted 2004-04-23 01:04 PM


precious
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