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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
Never was such sweet command as six years young,with treat in hand, un-shod feet on grassy land, go running fast,then quick-still stand, to speed again for no clear cause, as youthful season claps applause and marks it well for future thought, to be caressed and not forgot- a long ago soft summers' haze, a so missed one of once were days. ------------------ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Paul I really like this one for the melancholy it evokes. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
oh, I do like this one...alot! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Good poem Paul, made me remember when I was young. Made me feel good. Thanks! I also wanted to let you know, that I told Lady X how I felt about her, it didn't quite work out the way I wanted it to. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Memory invoking and beautifully done  Love your style.------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
Thanks for the kind words everybody. Richard,so sorry things didn't turn out as hoped...at least you know and so does she. That's a positive I think. B.W. PAL ------------------ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I still go barefooted - and only socks in the winter.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We live again in our grandchildren's laughter... well done, Sir! |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
But Sunshine-I'm kidless! Thanks for your words and Nan too. signed, The ex-musician who only fathered songs, PAL ------------------ |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
P.S. to Nan-ONLY socks? PAL ------------------ |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Short sweet and packed full of goodness, loved it. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
delightful PAL......I too like your style.......... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Paul, Very nice. I liked this immensley. Thank you. Tyson |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
"Father of songs"? any we might know? ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
(no,I'm not posting this to get "on top"-heights make me dizzy!) Pepper, Possibly but not probably.(how's that for being cryptic?) Love to all,really appreciate the support. PAL ------------------ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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