Open Poetry #2 |
The Loneliest Place That I Know |
Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
the loneliest place that I know. Darkness fades like a sweet memory in the light of the early dawns glow. The loneliest place that I know and the sound of the wind through the trees. In the light of the early dawns glow I send a whisper to you on the breeze. And the sound of the wind through the trees I will send my love there to you. I send a whisper to you on the breeze just something for you to cling to. I will send my love there to you close your eyes can you feel my caress? Just something for you to cling to, on a day when you feel loneliness. Close your eyes can you feel my caress? Let it help you to ward off your pain. On a day when you feel loneliness, it might keep you from going insane. Let it help you to ward off your pain in the light of the early dawns glow. It might keep you from going insane the loneliest place that I know. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Sorry that you feel so bad Lucie. I am here to help see you through it as you help me. Wonderful pantoum. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah, I see you've been talking with Dream....nicely done Lucie ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is beautiful Lucie Very soothing. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ah Lucie, you sure know how to bring tears to my eyes....beautiful piece here, girl....This was absolutely tear-jerking.... ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
a beautiful and such sad piece, thanks for sharing, I too visit, the lonliest place that I know.. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've been there too |
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