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Lucie
Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-09-18 11:29 PM


Echo’s of silence surround me,
the loneliest place that I know.
Darkness fades like a sweet memory
in the light of the early dawns glow.

The loneliest place that I know
and the sound of the wind through the trees.
In the light of the early dawns glow
I send a whisper to you on the breeze.

And the sound of the wind through the trees
I will send my love there to you.
I send a whisper to you on the breeze
just something for you to cling to.

I will send my love there to you
close your eyes can you feel my caress?
Just something for you to cling to,
on a day when you feel loneliness.

Close your eyes can you feel my caress?
Let it help you to ward off your pain.
On a day when you feel loneliness,
it might keep you from going insane.

Let it help you to ward off your pain
in the light of the early dawns glow.
It might keep you from going insane
the loneliest place that I know.


© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-09-18 11:31 PM


Sorry that you feel so bad Lucie. I am here to help see you through it as you help me.

Wonderful pantoum.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-18 11:32 PM


Ah, I see you've been talking with Dream....nicely done Lucie

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

caroline
Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm
3 posted 1999-09-19 12:07 PM


This is beautiful Lucie Very soothing.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
4 posted 1999-09-19 12:28 PM


Ah Lucie, you sure know how to bring tears to my eyes....beautiful piece here, girl....This was absolutely tear-jerking....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-09-19 12:33 PM


a beautiful and such sad piece, thanks for sharing, I too visit, the lonliest place that I know..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2004-04-23 12:54 PM


I've been there too
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