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Open Poetry #2

Despair Prayer

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

0 posted 1999-09-17 12:35 PM

My apologies... this poem boomeranged and caused more pain than it portrayed.

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RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

1 posted 1999-09-17 12:43 PM

Suthern:

Come here, so I can put my arms around you and give you a whopping great big hug...

PLEASE

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

2 posted 1999-09-17 12:51 PM

Queen - she needs a whopping alright - right on the seat of her pants! This is really good, Belle, albeit a tad dark and gloomy. Are you OK?

JTF
Member

since 1999-08-09

Posts 319
France

3 posted 1999-09-17 12:58 PM

A fine poem Suthern !

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 1999-09-17 01:47 PM

Spanking? (perk) This might be interesting!

And you're right, LJA... I could get much gloomier if I tried! *G*

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-09-17 02:22 PM

Suthern this is so sad but so beautifully written. We need to cheer you up a bit now, seems my last few poems are on a bit happier note, lets see what we can do with you now.
Hugs

Ruth

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

6 posted 1999-09-17 03:46 PM

You had me from the first line to the very
last.SAD.....

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Helewes

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 1999-09-17 03:50 PM

hoot & Jenny... I am sorry to make people sad... it's only the poem, not the poet! Perhaps I should post that disclaimer? LOL. Thanks for your kind words!

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