Tick... Tock... ( Inspired by Seymour Tabin)

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Open Poetry #2

Tick... Tock... ( Inspired by Seymour Tabin)

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-09-16 11:54 PM

Time is racing with the night
Tick by tick
Shades and shadows conquer light
Tack by tack

And my pen will never rest
Tick by tick
Broken heart beats in my chest
Tack by tack

Everything begins to change
Tick by tick
Night is acting on the stage
Tack by tack

I’m becoming sore and weak
Tick by tick
The sky turns dim and black
Tack by tack

I fall asleep upon my back
Tick by tick
And my dreams seem so unique
Tack by tack

Now I do not hear the clock
Tick and tack

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I fell in love and kept on falling

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-09-17 09:50 AM

Now that's an interesting one Master...I liked it!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-09-17 11:09 AM

Me too..... I like it too, Master...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-09-17 12:08 PM

Thanks Hoot and Nan, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Seymour for the inspiration.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-09-17 01:05 PM

Master,
The honors are all yours.
You did a wonderful job, congrads.

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

5 posted 1999-09-17 03:19 PM

Thanks, glad you liked it.

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