Green Velvet (one of my first real poems)

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Open Poetry #2

Green Velvet (one of my first real poems)

IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27

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0 posted 1999-09-16 11:31 PM

dappled sundrops
whispering autumn trees
meadow flecked with wild color
like the splattering from an artist's brush
soft feathers of clouds
like my lover's kisses
float on October skies
Green Velvet
embraces
passion melts
crashing thunder
light like a stained glass kaleidescope
shatters through me
as your heart meets mine
in a sunlit glen

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Every man has in himself a continent of undiscovered character. Happy is he who acts Columbus to his own soul.......J. Stevens

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

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1 posted 1999-09-16 11:44 PM

Eloquent, Izzy.
vivid imagery. I derive a very tranquil scene from this poem. beautiful

Michael

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

2 posted 1999-09-17 02:15 AM

The imagery here is lovely...a wonderful first poem...keep writing! :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

Colin
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since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

3 posted 1999-09-17 02:19 AM

wow! You touch my soul. (but I guess you know that yeah?)

Love, EW.

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I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know?

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 1999-09-17 10:29 AM

Go Izzy......

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-09-17 09:52 PM

Beautiful, beautiful work...I love the imagery..exquisite piece.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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6 posted 2004-04-23 01:13 PM

nice...very nice

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