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Lost In The Crowd |
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freedom 63 New Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 3Glen Easton, WV, USA |
Does anyone see me? I don't think so My inner being damaged that's the way it goes. Does anyone hear me? I cry silently. No one notices. That's the way it's gotta be. A superficial smile no one would know. My heart is breaking. Is losing it's glow. It's been a bad year Months numbering nine What can I do? Running out of time. Life Turns a deaf ear, Blind eyes do not see, No one understands, That's the way it's gotta be. hhhhhhh |
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BrightLight Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 45 |
Welcome, I see you through your words, and hear the emotions that they evoke. Nine months may have passed with no joy, but the three months remaining are a wonderful time to change the course. Glad you have come to touch base here at Passions, may this be the beginning of your happiness.  |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Very good. very good indeed. Of couse I could be biased!!! Flowers to ya mutter...... ha ha ha |
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freedom 63 New Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 3Glen Easton, WV, USA |
Thank you BriteLite for your thoughtful and kind words. I thought I was lost in another crowd until I got your response. Thanks again. Have a good night. I will be writing again, soon. Thank you Richard 33 for your response. I could almost smell the flowers. I guess you could be biased, just a little bit. |
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freedom 63 New Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 3Glen Easton, WV, USA |
Thank you BriteLite for your thoughtful and kind words. I thought I was lost in another crowd until I got your response. Thanks again. Have a good night. I will be writing again, soon. Thank you Richard 33 for your response. I could almost smell the flowers. I guess you could be biased, just a little bit. |
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