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A New Day
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A New Day |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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(This was written in a game of poetry tag with Johnt300....we thought we'd post it to see what you thought...thanks Tyson...hugs  )A New Day The harsh surf crashes upon the sand Lifting seagulls with noisy flight The sound of both the waves and gulls Muted by the beating of my own heart With your hand in mine, cherished friend The ocean seems but a world away With our toes sunk in the sand We walk along the waters edge Horizons view within our reach And lifes new day has just begun ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 09-16-99).] |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Great tag team there  Nice job!------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I figured it's about time I comment to you first instead of last - but either way, I enjoy just as much - especially when it's about the ocean... If this is a joint effort, keep up the good teamwork.. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you both Nan and Caroline...we wrote this in a matter of a few minutes ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well you two have done wonders in a matter of minutes. The rest of us are in touble. Very nice you two!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whtdove and passing shadows, thank you both Whtdove...I've read everyone elses poetry here, I think no one has anything to fear ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
Love this one!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
thanks juanita ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful poem! I like to see poets working together like this! |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Thanks to all for the comments. We had a lot of fun with these and I'm looking forward to more of it. Thanks again. Tyson |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Poet....thanks alot And I second Tyson's statement about having fun with these and looking forward to more ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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