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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16
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0 posted 2005-01-11 08:08 PM


She was a master story-teller, able to invent plot lines, themes, and characters at the blink of an eye. She amazed her friends, her family, her teachers with her constant creativity, her quickness to take an idea and run with it. She never hesitated to share her gift, spinning out tale upon tale about her favorite characters. She was the center of every group, because she could re-invent the stories to fit in with that group. And she loved it. Because for a minute, she wasnt herself. She wasnt Jenna, but instead became the story, became the characters, held her destiny in her own hands. She could make what she wanted happen, have disaster or romance, children, lovers or friends at her word. She controlled the world, and she liked it that way.

lemme know what you think!
_ker

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Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

1 posted 2005-01-12 12:18 PM


I like the way you use words - I found it very smooth to read
miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
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2 posted 2005-01-13 04:07 PM


She could make what she wanted happen, have disaster or romance, children, lovers or friends at her word. She controlled the world, and she liked it that way.

This is the beauty of writing and story telling!  

I enjoyed your well written words.

            misc'e

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-01-14 09:07 AM



I say, write on!

Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 147

4 posted 2005-03-04 07:40 PM


I dunno, if you feel it then, well, feel it.
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2005-03-04 09:01 PM


you have an idea right there, run with it and see what happens, that is the only way you will know.
Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
6 posted 2005-03-20 03:27 PM


it could be cool.
keep writing.

merlynh
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 411
deer park, wa
7 posted 2005-05-27 06:22 PM


Okay, now I'm waiting to hear a story from the story teller to back up the intro.
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