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May 16, 1998
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
I want to pull my hair back and run far away, in the rain, on a summer evening. I want to lay on a hot sandy beach, under the sun, listening to children play and adults socializing while keeping to myself in solitude. I want to climb the ladder of a high-dive and feel confident with eyes on my body and form... I want to feel sexy, feminine. I want to fall in love all over again every day with my husband. I want to laugh all the time with my girlfriends. I want to make my children happy every second of every hour.... I want to fall asleep ever night in the arms of the other half of myself. ©~onevoice~ ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
This reads well as prose, but the imagery is poetic too. I think this, like the other stories posted are so replete with poetic imagery, that they could be considered both. Format then would the distinction. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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leelew Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 89highmount,ny,usa |
Nicely Done!! |
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KwiatMan Junior Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 17Florida |
Peachy keen [This message has been edited by KwiatMan (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This has such strong feelings in it, and i think you've expressed them very deeply. I get such a sense of peace reading this, like that's the way it should be. Very nice work! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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