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A Random L-Sequence Impulse
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A Random L-Sequence Impulse |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA 
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Its that simple and that complex In a whirl of wired thoughts Transcending memories of matter What matters most The fit of face to palm or the fit of lust Grinding Justified Left to marginal parameters Set by tab-bar sequence spaces and escape/delete keys flashing blue-yellow/yellow-blue Close to the hand Where the face was formerly fit Now fits a plastique mouse Exploding on impact with words that drip Click and drag Slow deep moans that sound like Love Sounding aqua-marine in depth charged sonic plays Transcending what matters most Until face fits palm- ed reality and space between parameters is only breath Love Words that matter most in the whirl of simple-complex rhythms Random impulses fade As we remain human Fitting face to palmed Forever Love. ~haze < !signature--> "I shall leave nothing before matchsticks." [This message has been edited by haze (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Your words feel good in my mouth when I read them aloud haze -- thankyou for another slashing bite of poetic magic.  |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
Hey LR-THANK YOU! I had fun pulling the taffy of this elliptical wisp of cyber-love! So I am pleased you found it sweet... Til Again ~haze |
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