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Song Of The Sonoran (an abstract rhyme)
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Song Of The Sonoran (an abstract rhyme) |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA 
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One Night Over Oh! you night blooming cereus, ghost flower and pearly stones. Sing out between quartz; Between crevice, and rock. Sing for me Sonoran. Sing iguana after noon. My Chara, Chuparosa, and red poppy bloom. Sing for me Sonoran; Pipe-organ cactus cries. One night over Sonoran in Rose Boa eyes. ~haze *Here's the BIG CLUE my friends! and CHECK IT OUT! It rhymes. Oh I feel a flu coming on... HELP!!! please?* < !signature--> "I shall leave nothing before matchsticks." [This message has been edited by haze (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
Yes but the point is .. i only just saw this AFTER I guessed .. anyway I knew a couple of days ago after your giveaway post on my sonnet .. just didn't want to blow your cover... heh heh another lovely sounding poem btw .. even though the words are strange to me i see the parched landscape Philip |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
You get the prize! But all i have to offer at the moment is a BIG SMILE! Thank you Philip! The words are names of flora and fauna residing in the Sonoran (southern tip of Arizona into Califonia to Mexico) American US desert! Most of the words are based in the Spanish language also, another reason perhaps they sound so strange... Damn me and my diaphanous vocabulary. *L* TA...~haze |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Oh songstress with edge, you have cut a most melodious track and made the desert wet with beauty...  |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
*~haze bows to LR~ TY & TA My Friend! |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Haze: It's so good to have you back. I've been falling so far behind in my replies that I missed the chance to read your alter-ego's work. That said, I appreciate a poet who doesn't fall into the trap of thinking that rhymes must occur at the end of lines (Who made that a rule, anyway?). Very interesting rhyme scheme. Enjoyed the song, lady bard. Hasta luego. Jim "If I rest, I rust." - Martin Luther |
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