Critical Analysis #1 |
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Nightspear New Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 8Michigan, USA |
A verry close friend wrote this. Please let me know what you all think and I am honoring any title suggestions I know I said I was guilty and I regret everything, I wish you would forgive me for it all, I know the sadness it will bring. I loved you at that moment, for a while it was just right, But then it ended and now I know you cry yourself to sleep at night. The pain I have inflicted on my body and in my heart, I've lost all hope for us as I sadly watch us part. I trust you with my life; you chased away my fears, But you can't help me when I cry, can't chase away the tears. So many times I've watched it and told myself beware, The love we shared is gone, I wonder, do you still care? Your face appears in my dreams; your voice is in my head, I walk without knowing that the love we had is dead. Now I know what heartache is, let me tell you this, After thoughts of when we touch, every time we kiss. I have to keep my head up high, try to give a smile, Getting over you isn’t easy; it'll take a while. But you'll be here to comfort me, right up till the end, Just because the love is gone, doesn't mean you’re not my friend. I used to say I love you, I used to hold your hand, I would listen when you talked and truly understand. We still sit and talk at night, about nothing, really at all, But sometimes I sit crying, just waiting for your call. Just waiting to hear your voice, to see what you will say, The pain will not leave, please make it go away. I just wish you were here to hold me as I cry, To sit with me and watch our love, watch it slowly die. ------------------ Nighspear{~*~} |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
I? Can't really say. |
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-DEE- Junior Member
since 1999-10-29
Posts 14SOUTH AFRICA |
Very moved by this poem - dare I say it even brought a tear... it echos so much of my life right now.... ------------------ -DEE- "We feel what we feel, 'cause we do what we do; we do what we do, 'cause we feel what we feel" |
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