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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
on that soul-bludgeoning cusp between the object and subject material and mind What is the date exactly? i'm not/never/ever sure about this that or another and whenever I think I am therefore i am not -then reality sneaks up on me ever so stealthily- -I exist liminally -i am a project for Marx and Lacan but mostly I am a project for me -and i ponder and peruse I wonder and wish until I don't know about me or you or them and even nihlism makes sense that's about the nature of that God-[rules is rules guys - just live with it]saving cusp "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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lizzyluv Junior Member
since 2001-12-27
Posts 46nh, usa. we suck. |
that was interesting, i liked the contradictory word play you used. your rhythm is interesting, in that it seems to correlate directly w/your thinking process. the points you're debating could be shattered into so many more pieces of writing. i like. "everyone is broken by something they love and worship"- Francesca Lia Block |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
Where thing meets nothing....there is life. thanks for the read. |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
hey, who edited my poem! at least just change the word, you throw off the whole poem, whoever did it! "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear rich-pa, I liked this one-liked the rhythm and flow. Nan |
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