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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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This paper upon which my words print Leaving a thought unblemished Your remarks adjust the untouched For the mind is incapable of thoughts Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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Kirk T Walker Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 357Liberty, MO |
Xeonox: Another nicely done 4-liner, not as abstract as usual, but still ambigous enought that I can pull a couple different meanings from it. I might consider losing the punctation or some of it because this doesn't really make a complete sentence. Disclaimer: The preceding statement is just my opinion. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
thank you for the advice kirk. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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